A while back I drew this. [link]
Then I thought it'd be fun to see what kind of feedback I'd get if I asked for an accompanying short story, which was this. [link]
As part of the deal
ask for this very image. Well... not exactly this. The request was for the CMC and the aftermath of one of their cutiemark attempts. So I immediately thought, "Hey, compound fracture!"
Incidentally, I am legitimately trying to improve myself as an artist, so this is going to be the first of probably many pieces that I'm requesting a critique on. Those who know about art, like are actual art majors or graduates or people who are just way better at art than me, please give me some feedback. Please focus on the technique and not the content. I get it, no one wants to see Snappedlegaloo.
Thanks in advance.